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Ok, I get you are trying to imitate schizophrenia, but having it as the title is very offensive. I like the song very much, but please change the title, I would appreciate it. People trying to imitate something they don't have makes me very angry, even if it is respectful. My point is, if you do not have schizophrenia, please do not name your song that. A recommended title you could change it to is "Distorted Reality", although that might not be as eye-catching, it would not make me angry.
Logini